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My Queen

As she awakens, the sun appears
above the horizon….
Beautiful, radiant, but small…
small in comparison to my lovely Queen
Her beauty reaches the universe
elegant, soft, enticing

Her warmth stirs within my soul,
my heart flutters immensely,
Eyes astonished by her presence
I stand in bewilderment
A true gift, A gift from above……
rose petals soften her walk

I tremble in delight on her approach,
a singing choir of song birds follow
Butterflies surround, her halo……
breathless I become as she moves closer
My soul revived, resurrected
a new man I become…

Taken from one look,
of eyes, the doorway to her soul…..
Beautiful shades of all gems
enticing, leading to her hearts beat
Capturing my breath
in a moment of time

Mesmerizing, her beauty
as if the most charismatic rainbow
Coal black hair, as the night sky
skin, soft, pure
As the full moon glows
as if an Angel

Her breath as spoken
it pulls at my inner being
Grasping, calling, melting
my soul is un-fire
Of her, my thoughts
for an eternity…

 

 

 

love, your King

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • jasminerose
    January 9

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    Wow, Sir Outofmind,
    I would say this certainly is well written from the heart and one deserving a bravo.. afterall... to have such a fire of love of this magnitude, burning for eternity is definitely one a King should be lucky to have, keeping it burning is another thing all together..
    Remember...Love is devotion.
    Enjoyed the colors, pic and the choice of words you have used to express your true inner feelings
    Have a wonderful day and looking forward to reading more of your poems.
    Jazzy


    • OutofMind
      January 22

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      I am truly grateful for your commenting on this poem and for your applauds. I will try to do my best for the lady in waiting. Thank you. OutofMind


      • jasminerose
        January 23
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        Such an exquisite piece for sure, my pleasure to read and enjoy, thank you for offering such a touching love poem to read.
        Now, don't keep your "lady in waiting"... in too long of a wait Time has a way of changing things.... and if she is all that you have expressed so heartfelt honestly and vividly, her heart should never be put on hold for any reason or circumstance if it is true love! That would just seems more like a cruel intention instead of seizing the moment!
        My best wishes to you both
        Jazzy