To grow up and reach
your height,
that's my wish with
all my might.
You took me in not
from your seed,
a little orphan lost
nourished my need.
We are a great family
I finally belong,
living among all nature
singing my happy song.
A contest entry
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1000 points, ended November 10, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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Very nice write my friend you have captured the picture and put it to writing perfectly.
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Thanks much for your comment!
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delightful
This is a lovely poem it does a little irish dance in my imagination, it is very gentle and warm i love it nice write littlefishone
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Thanks much for your kind words. It's amazing how we can all look at something and find different ways to see it.
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This is beautiful and flows really well...I am adopted and this poem really sung to me...i loved the flow and the simple beauty in the poem
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Thanks Meej!! When I seen this pic the poem "The Orphan" just seem to be what it made me feel.
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Your take on this picture was perfect! I don't know what else to say.
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A truly captivating write on this picture Beautful imagery indeed. Thanks so much for your entry.
Gaylene
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