the house was old and rotting, but rather plain
it stood at the far end of winding Mulberry Lane
it's only neighbor's; densely unpopulated woods
she arrived alone, as the rules said she should
the house had no backyard, just a steep rocky cliff
there was a stench of death, noticable the first whiff
she only had to stay until morning to win the bet
but a dare she was already beginning to regret
in the living room she heard a noise, she went to look
stunned, she watched an unassisted floating book
she followed it as it made it's way across the room
balanced itself on top of a cobwebbed covered broom
convinced it was a stunt, the house couldn't be haunted
sent there by friends who for years teased and taunted
she'd spend the night thinking of a better, scarier prank
'cause when it came to jokes, they always tried to out rank
suddenly the book flew through the air and down the hall
with such great speed it gave her heart a bit of a stall
the book entered a bedroom and slammed the door
slammed the door...how was that possible... she fell to the floor
scared to death and miles from nowhere with no transportation
night about to fall, it was clear there would be no relaxation
she began lighting candles one room at a time to help ease her mind
but as she circled back she was shocked at what she would find
the candles not only were no longer lit, but still looked brand new
the wicks still white, unburnt, as if she had never been through
so she lit them again and started her treck once more
again, when circling back, it was if they came out of a store
why had she choosen the option of coming alone... so very dumb
she stood terrified with no friend and the night was still young
maybe she could use a childhood trick that worked on holidays
go to bed early and hurry to sleep to help pass the time away
she made her way to the bedroom, the book was still inside
she wondered if it would mind if for the night she would reside
carefully she walked passed it, turned the sheets down on the bed
the book began to rise and she froze in suspense with dread
but the book gently floated to the bed and laid upon the sheet
as if to say, "I'll keep you company, it's time the two of us meet."
she looked at the title, ' The haunting of Mulberry Lane'
this was not her perferred reading if she were to remain sane
climbing upon the matress with the greatest of fear
clearly the dumbest move she would make all year
before she could even straighten both her legs
the sheets lifted, then covered her, as if held up by pegs
no longer could she contain herself and let out a scream
this was much more than a prank, or so it did seem
and with her screach, the bed began a vigorous rock
there were sounds of footsteps, at the door a loud knock
the room turned ice cold, she pulled the covers over her head
she was terror stricken, then violently thrown from the bed
"Stop it!", she yelled, "I honestly can't take anymore!"
that's when she heard her parents, "unlock your bedroom door!"
Author notes
S u s a n E P e n n y c u f f
In a list
A contest entry
- Mystery and Imagination by knitonepearlone.
600 points, ended November 20, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mysterious, Intriguing, Something With A Twist by My Chronos.
1600 points, ended September 10, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *PIF* Hauntings, Ghosts, Scary, Funny, Halloween by Mystic-Fire.
800 points, ended October 6, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Love it
I love the flow and rhythm and rhyme you have created here. I love the detail you have in here. The images you have put forth with your words are excellent. The story was great and the ending was a surprise.
This was a very interesting write,
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This was suspenseful throughout with perfect rhythm. I was on the edge of my seat ...and I adore your way with words. Once I got to the end I definitely was caught off guarded by the way it ended. Very well written.


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That was great. It was brilliant. It was awesome. It was fantastiv. Which word should I choose? I know...I'll choose all of them! I loved your rhyme. I really enjoyed reading it. Great imagination! I have this picture in my head but I can't get it out! It's like you've got an idea and a light bulb appears but you can't get rid of it! Thanks for your entry!
Wish you the best of luck!
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Wow that was interesting. Very interesting. I enjoy reading it. I hope you do well and thanks for your entry.
-Jess

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Great atmosphere created in this poem. You have stirred my imagination with your imagery. Well done and thanks for entering!


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