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My tears are no-longer
the fruits of my sorrow
but tears of liberated joy
To have become a better man
leaving behind a blasphemous boy
Resilient in lifes adversities
I'm writing with good thoughts ahead
Turning a new leaf in the book of life
the new chapter now to be read

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Just some random thoughts i need to keep reminding myself,
something i tend to forget at times. *sighs*

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  • poetyaknoit
    November 29, 2008
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    simple and beautifully written. well done


  • ratkos
    November 12, 2008

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    rebirth is always beautiful.painful,but worth every step.heres onto bigger and better things.be strong!thank you for entering

  • Mickie27
    November 9, 2008

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    Never lose that shadow of hope, never give in and never give up going no matter what. Every day is a new chapter, every day is a new page. Tears of sadness come to try us but, moving on is liberating. When you have lived through sorrow you grow and mature. This is an excellent poem.


  • chilali
    November 5, 2008

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    Random? Wow! This is an amazing piece for random thoughts! Haha. Well done Ken! And best to you in the contest!


  • Alyzeh
    October 31, 2008

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    I find it amazing, how you let the rhymes flow so easily..it's inspirational! I think I feel the need to write something too now, only it wont be 'that' great, if these are random thoughts, I wonder what's going to happen if you write with the intention to create a masterpiece. Great work Ken! Good to see you stepping out of that phase. *bounce bounce* Hehe

    Much love!


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    this chapter inspires positivity not just to you but to everyone who reads this.

    I'll give you a bookmark then j/k you know how I always want to make you smile but always end up a goof

    Anna Lee


  • xXchellXx
    October 30, 2008
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    :)

    i love this, its simple, and beautiful and full of hope and future!!

  • xXchellXx
    October 30, 2008
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    hey!


  • Leonura
    October 30, 2008
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    And may that chapter in life bring you great joy.


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    dont worry.. if you ever forget i will kick your ass


  • AshesofAngels
    October 30, 2008

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    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I absolutly love it and i think ill join you in the new chapter. I've been meaning to shed the skin for awhile

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