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Lost Within "Love"

These feeling die
before my lips.
Too afraid to
question your words.

It's all too far
away from here.
I can't believe
this is how you really feel.

I should walk
away before I'm lost
in these feelings that
I loath to admit.

Author notes

Once again, it's short and suckish.

I feel like this, though. I'm not kidding.




My Musical Muses: "Home" by Framing Hanley. "Same Direction" by Hoobastank. "Five Against the World" by Story of the Year. "No One Cares" by Atreyu. "Who's Going Home With You Tonight" by Trapt.

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  • Innocent-Lies
    November 12, 2008
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    very cute.

    I feel the same way.