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chill risings


early morning sounds remind me
of Manhattan's slowly rising dawn
and single file cars in search of
briskly hot coffee and warm bagels

the chill of a new day is fall's answer
to the end of summer's bliss

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prompt: Manhattan chill

38 words

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this piece, I wanted to be in that single file of cars waiting for that coffee. Best to you in the contest


  • apropos
    October 30, 2008
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    exceptionally good.

    • carole21
      October 31, 2008
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      thanks

      many thanks for the compliment on chill risings !!