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alchemy of the soul

Everything was fresh and new that year
Crisp leaves crunching under our feet
Longing and loneliness permeated the halls
And empty words fell from the lips of wrinkled men
Tired and tenured, hardened to the exuberance of youth
And the crushing bulwark of despair

Weary now, laughing through a cigarette, I look back
Wanting everything, believing in nothing
We were the future
And where are we now?

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    This is a very nice piece of work with great use of creative imagry and a good match for the picture prompt nice write littlefishone


  • pumpykin
    November 5, 2008
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    This is fabulous, I love it It's very beautiful


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    A stunning piece indeed! Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


  • aeolia
    October 30, 2008
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    Your title reminds me of a Donne poem!