A shoulder to cry on.
A pillar of strength.
I'll be the support you are looking for.
Though you find yourself weak,
You've given me the strength to be.
Hold on tight.
Time has taken it's tole I know,
but I am still young.
Feeding off your once victorious spirit.
Lean on me,
for I am now you.
A contest entry
- Less than 50 Trophies? Come On In! by AliceinPoetryLand.
1000 points, ended November 10, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Beautiful and deserving of your award, love the transformation and mention of pillar of strength and victorious spirit. Blessings
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Such a lovely take on the picture. This whole piece is a wonderful metaphor for the picture.
Thanks so much for your entry
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Gaylene
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absolutely beautiful. it tells such a great story in so little lines.
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