Find a rock in his pretentious bark
he doesn't bite as hard as this is to chew
this blanket of leaves
was all that ever hid him from the truth
: leave me alone
: [[ hold me ]]
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: "I want to be loved"
I've leaned on him ever since
Author notes
im sorry if this is bad
to me it looked like they were
leaning on each other
and i thought that i made some good refences to trees?
like chew
you get gum from trees
hahah?
A contest entry
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1000 points, ended November 10, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Excellent! Love the metaphorical tone of this piece. Excellent imagery and so well written.
Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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oooh after seeing the picture i really got what you were talkin bout!
i really liked the imagery
best of luck in the contest <333 -
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i <33 u
hahahah
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