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This Bitter Pill is All in God's Will

Crushed and defeated I go forth
Into the wild, without you to call my own

Like an old tree I have faded away
As each leaf of our love falls into the unknown

But I look for inspiration
For hope that comes with life, love and faith

A new season of love must still be in store for us
And let all the old bitterness be reduced to sediment

But not only a brand new tree of love we must be
but a tree of youth, of forever

Today I swallow this bitter pill of love's end
But soon I hope I'll find God's guiding hand

Cause this is according to nature
According to His will

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    I Love this take on the photo. I enjoyed the spiritual centre and the imagery is wonderful.
    Thanks so much for your entry)
    Gaylene


    • star lunatic
      October 30, 2008
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      thank you very much! I really liked your contest! More power to you! =)