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Our Peace

I am yours and you are mine
And we'll be dancing, rain or shine
You love my fiery red-orange hue
I love the security I have in you
I'll lean over for a little kiss
And you'll embrace me; no better feeling than this
Even when the leaves fall down
And the cold strips us bare and the snow's all around
Even in a storm that no one else can face
I'll still lean and you'll still embrace

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  • Rhythm Child
    November 24, 2008

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    this really drew me into the moment, a really great write

    are those trees trying to hug o.O
    beautiful poem


    • pumpykin
      November 24, 2008
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      Thank you

      Lol I dunno, the trees just grew like that I guess


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 7, 2008
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    very nice well done inded


  • AmazinJason
    November 1, 2008
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    this is really sweet,
    a very enjoyable read
    i like it a love it

  • The Jigsaw Poet
    October 30, 2008

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    This just amazingly sweet and beautiful imagery I loved reading this (hehe read 3 times before i commented)

    I am so glad I came across you on this site your poems are great

    SMILEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYY


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Oh just beautiful I love the imagery and where you tookm this picture.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene

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