Changing God's earthly garden
To one of disquise and unique beauty.
The fallen sheets of snow
Make ones heart ache...
Not only from the cold,
But by the way everthing is painted
In a canopy of white.
The tall moutains are snow capped
The trees branches wave in the winds
And the river's banks are framed
Making everything appear magical.
And enchanted...
Like living a dream of fairy tales.
So
Next time you see snow...
Admire the artristy of gods hand.
Don't just see it as snow
but
A unique art form of exquiste beauty
Shaped my millions of snowflakess
for
Like life itself
The type of beauty you see
Is the same beauty you feel in your heart.
dragonheart1
Author notes
This poem is over the 50 word limit but I can't shorten its message...So it stands as is even if disqualified for its length.
A contest entry
- 50 words: Winter by whiterabbit..
500 points, ended November 27, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do you see only snow or the beauty of God's artistry?
Comments
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Great write and I will remember when i'm sputtering about the snow this winter.
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i love winter and your description of it fits my idealistic views on the cold months
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good luck in the contest
this is good
love always
xx
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