loved you
past went fast
no satisfaction
unhappiness is pasted
by ill fate
on slate
Author notes
I wasted time, now time doth waste me.
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired - 10-15 words / 20 Poets by Kiddy.
600 points, ended November 26, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sad, I like how this connects to the quote. Good luck in the contest, this was a unique write.
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Interesting take on the prompt. I do feel as though some of the rhymes are rather forced. Rhyming isn't everything-- allow your words to be beautiful despite an odd or nonexistent scheme. Good luck in the contest!
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Good write but sad. Best to you in the contest.
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Loved this. Pity it currently busts the word limit, but you might just be able to trim off 5 words
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