Flames melt,
into a unruly green.
quite the same,
yet so different,
Not as straight,
stately or tall,
But just as beautiful,
In this beginning of Fall.
A contest entry
- Less than 50 Trophies? Come On In! by AliceinPoetryLand.
1000 points, ended November 10, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you feel when you read this?
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smooth, yes! very good.
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how beautifully penned, smooth flowing, well done my friend, good luck!!!
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Wow! I'm also in this contest, but I can't help but admire your poem! Your words are so powerful, yet so smooth. This is amazingly written.
Your future in writing is bright indeed. Good luck to you my dear! =) -
Brilliant!!!
I love this poem!! 'Fall' is sweet & simple, yet packs so much power in its few mesmerizing lines. 
Great take on the prompt!! 
Wishing you the best of luck in this contest!! 
Peace, love & hugs always, xx Cyn xx 
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Nicely penned indeed. Your words flowed softly and calmly. I love your first 2 lines in particular.
Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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