You see
You smell
You touch
You hear
You know that I am standing there
I see
I smell
I touch
I hear
Nothing.
Author notes
Haha wtf? lol yer it sucks... Idk how your supposed to interpret that... I wrote it from the promt Far Away Child... I guess its that I am here physically but emotionaly, mentaly im not? yer i really dont know...
A contest entry
- Distance by Lavender Butterfly.
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Comments
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well I guess that is okay... doesn't really fit the prompt tho. But it is an interesting write. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering this into my contest..
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I read that another way...
Like you're a ghost, so you feel nothing but because the other person was so emotionally attached to you -maybe before you died-? that they feel everything, becuase they were so close, and so are you.
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haha yer I didnt die... i meant it as someone with no self-esteem, ie me.
as in other people around this person know that they are there and know that they are capable of many things but all the person sees them self as is nothing...
and yer i said it was bad ok, everyone is allowed to write one or two bad poems ok?! lol
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So sadly drawn and expressive... x
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does that mean its bad?
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not at all... x
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