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Lust For A Friend

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A best friend she was always to me,
sharing everything and swapping stories.
Until that night waiting for her to get ready,
to go out and troll for some men for the night.

After getting out of the shower,
I saw her wet curvacious body.
My mouth starts to drool,
as she starts to put on her bra and panties.

Not being able to control myself,
I walk over and grab her from behind.
With both hands on her full breasts,
squeezing and rubbing gently to see what reaction I'll get.

She turns around taking my hand,
pulling me down on the bed with her.
I get a rush through my body,
since she gave me an okay with her actions.

Laying meekly on top of her,
with my fingers I trace around her nipple.
I cover the other one with my warm wet mouth,
feeling it getting hard on my tongue.

While making out with her nipple,
I put my hand between her soft thighs.
Waiting for her to open them a little on her own,
to give me an invitation to let me in.

As she opens for me slowly,
I run my fingers in between her slit.
Rubbing on her clit gently,
she begins to move her hips with me.

Licking from her nipple down to her shaved smooth pussy,
spreading her lips apart with my long tongue.
Sucking on her hard clit,
I pleasingly push a finger inside her.

Feeling how wet she was inside,
my own pussy starts to tingle from the excitement.
She starts to moan loud,
as I stroke her kitty cat with my finger.

She sits up and pulls off my shirt,
while I remove my pants quickly.
Pushing me down back onto the bed,
she starts to caress my breasts.

Sucking on my nipples back and forth,
she pushes my legs open with her knee.
Laying in between my legs kissing me,
down to my sweet wet pussy.

Spreading my lips apart with her fingers,
she dives in and starts to flick my clit.
I start to moan for more,
as she flicks and sucks my clit faster.

Inserting her finger inside of me,
stroking my walls even faster.
Starting  to moan louder,
my wettness from my pussy starts to run onto the bed.

Pulling her up towards me,
laying her back over onto her back.
I scissor her to where our pussies were touching,
we start to rub our pussies together.

Grinding into each other,
moaning not being able to catch my breath.
Feeling the heat going through my body,
as I feel the friction of her pussy rubbing against mine.

Our pussies bond together sharing juices,
as we both moan in ecstasy.
Our pussies start to quiver,
cumming all over each others clit.

We Lay there holding each other,
taking in the moment.
Both of us deciding to stay in for the night,
For another round.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I do not claim the picture being used with this write to be mine. Picture from arnejahn.net

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  • Swtpoetryman
    January 14

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    IT'S EASY TO SEE THAT THIS IS A SHINY GOLD TROPHY WINNER, INDEED.

    I needed a little play time after a hard and stressful day at the factory - and I must say that this did the trick for me! I ENJOYED the show from the closet - and as you two ravishing creatures were too busy to notice me - I even snuck off with your panties and bras - which I brought home with me to sniff and taste while stroking my dick - replaying the movie of two HOT woman in lust and in love - that this poem and background so beautifully presented to me. Thanks for sharing as always, Baby!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 12, 2008

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    Just makes me want to get a bit of the action, such a shame my boyfriend lives about 150 miles away from college here, as I just really want to get him on the bed and stroke him and... well, some other stuff that I'll just keep inside my sordid little brain.

  • Garret
    December 6, 2008

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    holy shit that was a hot poem. thank you for liking my poem im gonna be adding a lot more today so look out for em

  • Rmh4933
    November 3, 2008
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    Awesome

    Enjoyed the trip my mind took with this piece


  • Cry Wolf
    October 31, 2008

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    Mhmmmm, the smoldering imagery in this poem makes me short of breath just reading it! Your details and choice of words weave the erotic picture of these two women making love so deliciously sexy; this felt like a wonderfully sinful movie played out in front of me splendid job!

    Three clappies for you

    ~ Ink


  • tomisb
    October 31, 2008

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    there is a hard sexual edge to this piece, demanding, daring, demanding a reaction. Underneath that is a sense of surprise, a rush, a thrill and the discovery of something more, something different. It makes the edge soften. I makes the ending sensual, it makes the last line feel more like someone being seen with feelings they are not comfortable with.
    Peace,
    Tom B.


  • Rclane gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    Very nicely done painting the scene so well luring the reader deeper into the moment......Luck to you in contest.

    PS... I think line 9 has a small typo in it....het should be her?


  • darell
    October 30, 2008

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    Bravo..

    give me more more more more.
    This was heavenly baby. I got such
    a rise out of this piece. It was steaming hot.
    You write with such passion and detail.
    I was able to see everything right before
    my lustful eyes. BreathTaking!
    Please don't ever stop writing these
    delicious sex-capades. Mmmm! you make a
    grown man cry. Absolutely Exquisite.


  • Loversdance
    October 30, 2008
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    Wow. Damn that was sexy. Thanks sooo much for entering my contest!


  • penman gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    Excellent

    Oh my this was amazing. Some friendship! Really so hot. Best of luck in the contest.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    my goodness like grace jones said in boomerang SO WHEN ARE WE GOING TO FUCK ooh goodness this halloween is loaded baby full of whores like myself


  • Lexie - gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    HOTTNESS!!!!

    Extremly erotic and beautifully written as always!!
    you always leave us wanting more, fantasitcly delicious job here Mmmmmm


  • Glasyalabolas
    October 30, 2008

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    Hot and well paced, especially like the fact that it's an after shower scene and the grinding. Excellent.

    Good write.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 30, 2008

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    Great write with a hot picture!
    Lovely imagery you wrote this with!
    Well done and good luck.



    Jeremy0826


  • moluv10
    October 30, 2008

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    Great write! i love the picture! Vivid imagery in your words too! Keep doing your thing hun!

  • mcfreeman
    October 30, 2008
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    A fine write about

    a wonderful nite IN


  • Levesta
    October 30, 2008
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    WOW THIS IS ONE CRAZY WRITE AND U KNOW I'M LOVING GREAT JOB


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    MMMMM...

    Such good friends you are! it brings a tear to my eye! l.o.l. this was just so...TOUCHING!

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