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Final poem, By Blitz Tain Tallon, "A Final Farewell"

Never Fear
It maybe done and gone.
But, I'll tell you life goes on.
By the time anyone sees this,
I'll have moved on.

Gone from plain sight.
But still around although not to hold you tight.
At long last I've let the pain end.
Life gone that held me bound.

Slit of Wrists,
Stabs of knives.
Final farewells.
This is how it has to be.

Lost Soul
to wander the world.
cold and alone for all eternity
never to hear the words spoke of mortal men again.

Slit of Wrists
stabs of knives
did not end my life.
a air pocket no bigger than a breath.
slipped from the iv
in my arm tonight.

feeling to final effects of the cold grip of death
I am ready for one last word.
for all those who care
for all those who dont.
for all those who saught me in life know.

This is my Final Farewell.

By: Blitz Tallon.

Author notes

My name is Dennis. My friend asked me to post this. and so I did. Farewell.

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  • PANDAmonium
    March 11
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    Blitz, I know you may never read this but I feel the need to write it anyways. It has been a long while since I thought about you but for some reason, today, I did. I just wanted to say thank you. Thank you for all the good times we shared. You were a true friend and brother. I will forever remember Blitz Tain Tallon.

    -Justin
    Formerly known as, Dragon Heart


  • Alaya Maryianov
    January 17
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    Dennis... you wouldn't remember me... it's been long ago since i've had a chance to talk to you on here... but i guess that you most likely won't read this if you are giving up. You r such a great person and I am truely blessed to have seen the kindness you can give to someone so freely.

    ~White Paws.

  • Dark Edge
    October 31, 2008

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    Blitz,

    Don't you dare do this blitz, I understand that you haven't been feeling well again lately but don't you dare let up. There are many people here who love you for who you are and what you've had to overcome.


  • Little Blue Bird
    October 30, 2008

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    Too sad

    Good write, my dear Blitz, but please, PLEASE, PLEASE don't kill yourself. I would cry , you are my best friend on here and in real life I don't want to loose you.
    Never forget Blitz, you are loved.


  • shecantstopfalling.
    October 30, 2008

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    I like it. The first verse is the best, I rekon. Great write...but umm...dont kill yourself...plz dont

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