I never had any other desire so strong
as to keep you in this small house
cradled within the cracks
and I'll just love you
writing your name on the walls
kissing the spaces in between touched-up words
undone
Author notes
Prompt: my lips held his goodbye
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #19 by Aussie Gypsy.
550 points, ended November 1, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow, I am blown away by this entry, so beautifully written, I got lost and almost left without commenting. Best to you in the contest
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Oh once again you have chosen your words so softly yet they are so very sad and melancholy.
An amazing write.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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