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Fallen Dreams

Deep breathes
placing each tile
Hands trembling
as your picture comes to life
Perfectly arraigned
aligned in your mind
Until each piece  fall's

Struggling to find my muse lately :(

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  • chilali
    October 30, 2008
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    Nicely written!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    Clever concept!


  • Joan-of-Arc
    October 30, 2008

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    ok, so 'arraigned' should be arranged
    'fall's" should be falls


    sounds like broken love . thanks for following my instructions.

    -joan.