somewhere
beneath
another constellation
she was
the vessel …I rode
and her waves
carried me
to the brink of
fragility
Author notes
picture inspired;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2425/187.jpg?1225345977
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest #1,768,987 by PerVirtuous.
550 points, ended November 20, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrites short by Melissa Gayle.
600 points, ended December 10, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Well-expressed.
Congrats on the trophy.
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Lovely and deceptive...
how so few words can convey so
much for one to interpret in the areas
of sensory and lingering emotion. Blue
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This is absolutely beautiful.
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You have done well! Straight to the finalist list.
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Man, I wish I could do short like this.
So much deeper than the sum of it's words.
You are one of those poets I learn from, that make my own wee scribbles better. This is another clinic for me.
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such a traquil peace my friend
your heart is in this
it is beautifully done
such a great creator
God bless you...
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