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Your tomorrow, today..



Electric eyes,
Alluring smiles,
Beauty that could take you anywhere..

You walk, as people follow...
But do they know the truth?..

Melancholic eyes,
Fake smiles,
A soul living a lie...

Change and start now..
Because a tomorrow may never arrive.

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Quote Prompt - 4.) Live life to the fullest tomorrow may never be. Shahrukh Khan

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  • thirdlight
    November 11, 2008
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    Wow!



  • Alyzeh
    October 31, 2008

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    Shahrukh Khan has a famous quote too now? That's quite new. But I'm sure he' s going to be ultra proud of himself, once he finds out people are actually using his random sayings as an inspiration. Great write. I love the title and your words..it's so very true.


  • Kiddy
    October 31, 2008

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    Beautiful... Nice take on the prompt... I would say this poem is colorful...



    All the best
    Kiddy


  • Hikari Lady
    October 30, 2008

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    This was beautiful!! I loved your use of words. Good luck in the contest!

    ~Noor


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Strong!
    A wonderful opening, and a path laid follows...
    sadness and then a glimmer of hope, treasure each day
    Love Julie xx



  • LionessK silver member
    October 30, 2008

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    how very thought-provoking... and real and true.
    speaking the heart of so many... so well.
    excellent.


  • MD Masroor
    October 30, 2008

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    You started as inspiration to me, then as a challenge, but lately your poems has somehow improved drastically, and yet again, you've become just inspiration. Your poems has such great imagery and meaning, and it's just beautiful enough to actually be worth publishing. You truly are one great poet. Good luck in the contest!


  • thejollytinker
    October 30, 2008

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    There my girl be!!! No, that's her- right there, try to follow my finger... Unreal, babe- block unhinged, disassembled and thrown over the cliff, says me.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Sigh.. you have captured how we often feel at times.. like a walking fake putting on a happy face but inside melancholy!

    Wonderful write sweets!

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