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October Warning

I hear October’s cool appraisal
Of summer’s wrinkled face
Her dim eyes warn me
Of the coming snow white shroud.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    I miss the snow desperately, this only enhances that feeling.

    Nicely written.


  • arafura gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    Now that is chilling! Great work done within the confines of just twenty words. Excellent!