you said
it’s a sign.
before I go
sliding; graves down
let’s have sex
and I was
wide-white-inanimate-eyed.
Author notes
a lizard was found in the vicinity around the threshold of the house commonly known as the jungle. it was assumed to have taken it's last breath due to the excessive force applied to open a wooden door. the culprit is still at loose, any one who finds him/her will be rewarded with heavenly grace.
<---- suspect #1
<---- suspect #2
A contest entry
- 20 words by Melissa Gayle.
400 points, ended October 30, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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So good. Love "you said" as an opener and "graves down".
Jessica
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i think the last line is the one that makes it, it mirrors that simulateneous flashback of fantasy i think your trying to get across.
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lol!!! i enjoyed this.
-helen
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lmao.
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HAHAHAHAHA
suspect 2. i fucking know it.
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lol...I love this=)
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thanks
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i got my cuffs ready!!!
i think i may have to use force on the second guy
*gets taser ready*
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omg!!! ROFLMAO....I want evidence the lizard made it out with it's skin on...you are priceless
C
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what the hell
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lol...
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love!<3
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lols! where have you been?
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around..
. lol. i'm busy con mi universidad 
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