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The time





The time, vagabond in purgation,
while spheres gradually darkened
to quench thirsts of animal creatures,
accelerate, when don't find shelter.




















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~spiritualangel~
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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    Your ending line closed the piece perfectly. Nicely written.


  • thejollytinker
    October 30, 2008
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    So enigmatic. Had to stop the music to read it again, and it was a good song!