Winds’ farewell to smoke
- Fire’s rebirth
Stripper dresses so pretty
- Undressing is sure
Plastic-lipped you
- a Hatred’s home
Just relax!
Author notes
20 words
A contest entry
- 20 words by Melissa Gayle.
400 points, ended October 30, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wanna know what you think
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wow this is really unique. but cool though
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This was slightly disjointed to me, but still a good write.
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I really liked the way you expressed yourself in this! A very fine write, indeed. There was a lot of beauty in the flow the wording.
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I enjoyed this.
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You caused so many images to swirl in my mind! That's what poetry is supposed to do- thanks
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