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The Story Of Two Guys

`Nate I have to talk to you.’ murmured Josh, looking down at his school book.
`OOOOh, What about?’ Ben said, wiggling his eyebrows, one of bens many talents!
`Girls and Boobs!’Chris cried, throwing his head back with laughter.
`NO asshole!’ God, Chris and Ben were getting fucking annoying lately.
`Well, Yeah I suppose so’. Said Nate

They walked through the bleak school corridor and into their classroom.
Josh stood awkwardly, facing the whiteboard
`Um, Hello.what did you want to talk `bout?’
Josh turned slowly around, and forced himself to look Nate in the eye.
`I’m in love with you!’
`What? Well, then that means your gay!’ Nate Cried
`If you put it that way then, yes, im gay, and im in love with you!!!’
`But-But, But!’
`I’ve been in love with you from the very first moment I saw you!!’
`But-But, But!’Nate stammerd, gasping for air. `I have to go!’

Nate stood up and ran through the hallway and into the bathroom.
Josh ran after him and stood in the damp bathroom, the smell of stale urine in the air
`Nate?’ josh called knocking on the toilet door.
`Go away!’ a voice stuttered
`Nate why are you crying?’
`I’m not!’ the voice yelled furiously `And even if I was, Id want you to leave me alone!’
`Come on, at least open the door, Josh sighed `please?’
The toilet door slowly opened. Josh Quickly grabbed nates arms and swung him around to face him.
`TELL me why you’re crying!’ Josh demanded
`I ran out coz I was scared, and now im crying because..’ he took a deep breath `I love you too!’
Josh wiped the tears that were trickling down Nates cheeks.
He leaned in and kissed Nate softly on the lips.Nate tried to pull away, but then found that he actually liked it.Nate wrapped his arms around josh’s neck and pulled him closer
`I love you!’ he whispered

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  • Evil-Angel-Babe
    November 2, 2009
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    W-O-W

    hey that was awesome i loved it so much!


  • Borntowriteforever
    May 28, 2009
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    wow, an interesting story on how love is love no matter what gender it is. good job


  • dark-rose137
    December 20, 2008

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    ......lovely stry, excelent lot and stuff, but.....im sry, just gayness is always weird 4 me. im not prejudce or anythin, just think it weird. but i luv how u made it so real.


  • Fallen Ones Soul
    October 30, 2008
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    this is awsome i lurve it keep up the good work

    • NachoZ
      October 30, 2008
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      hahaha thanks!!!!!
      betta than last attempt??


  • Xxnightmare21xx
    October 30, 2008

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    i think your a really great writer. you should start writing a story and put it on here. i bet people would read it

    Kaycee


  • ReAdInG.iS.sExY
    October 30, 2008

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    mmmm touching
    you have really captured the complicity of love at a young age
    very lovely and emotional

    addie

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