Haunting feelings
Voice so sweet
Calming caresses
Visions keep
The past is gone
The present here
Future hides
I shed a tear
Alone I sit
You linger not
My heart is dead
And waits to rot
My one wish
Is your return
That loving touch
For which I yearn
Yet I know
Alone I'll be
Another life
Has taken thee
The dread I feel
Has come to stay
The horrid pain
Will have its way
I fall apart
No one can see
I beg you love
Return to me
Author notes
i like it
Comments
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not bad, the rhythm was really good until the last stanza, it got a little off then. You mispelled 'shed' in the shed a tear line. Other than that this was pretty good, well written and it seems that you had quite the inspiration to write this
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line 17 needs a W.
its is bitter sweet. the longing for a love that seems will never be.
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