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moons

candle burned

wax dripped
forming little kisses on my skin



I'm lonely

 lost
and your gaze found me
I followed your eyes through
this heavy fog

I love you
 [ hate ]
and I make sure to make it known


I pushed you down,
told you
to come home


complain
scream,
but just

 feel!


I just want to see you cry once
for all the times I ever did



you say you love me
                                [her]


wait

I can't keep up

I'm slowly losing this race


and these legs start cramping up



clouds turn into truths and

the paint on the wall starts to chip


as I dug in my nails deeper

I clawed half hearted moons

in the sky of my skin




is there hope for us



I don't want there to be

Author notes

bestie

here is goes

i am in a relationship
where i am confused on whether or not we should be together

infact
i think i have said we shouldnt

but the fact of the matter is
that we still are
and i dont know if that is bad

good

most likely bad

and im tired of feeling all these things i just want it to be better
but it doesnt look like it will ever be alright
and this is so frustrating

i want to be saved

but who is going to save me?



anways hope you like

[[ i dont ]]
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Comments


  • hks
    November 19, 2008
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    :[[

    thats sukcs


    • written-in-ink
      November 19, 2008
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      wow

      this was so old

      man
      i forgot about this

      man it sucks
      =[
      =P

      bleh
      this is not my best at all


  • innocence jaded.xx
    November 16, 2008

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    WOW. This is incredibleee. I was hooked from the first line. I don't even know how to describe how heartwrenching this is, because I know the feeling sooo well, and you really packed an emotion punch in the gut with this one.

    -I'm lonely

    lost
    and your gaze found me
    I followed your eyes through
    this heavy fog

    I love you
    [ hate ]
    and I make sure to make it known
    ...

    That was probably my favorite part of the entire poem. I'm so sorry you're going through this, love. It's never easy =/ & I'm here for you 100%. This poem was simply beautiful and left me in awe. Thanks for entering & welcome to the finalists♥