can you hear the rattling in the distance
its the chains you put around me
heart breaking to me your loves resistance
what do i have to do to make you see?
my love your my one and only
you better not laugh!
cant you see without you im lonely?
your my always and forever, my other half!
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awe.
I really like the second stanza.
So sweet.
Thank you for taking the time to enter,
best of luck. -
'your' in the last line should be you're.
other than that - a lovely ode wto the one you love
thanks for entering
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what a lovely dedication to one's love
this was a terrific poem
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