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I miss you

you had such a great life ahead of you
you were only 21
comin home from work
fell asleep and swerved
you hit that tracter trailer
without no hope
you were gone in a flash

they said you didn't sufer
i prayed to god that you would be surfin the clouds
or playin poker with grandfather


you're to young
to young to be gone

why must the good die young you ask??
well nobody's got the answer to that one

i miss you to death micheal
i'll love you till never

who knows??
i might be hit with a tracter trailer

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  • Greenemo
    November 14, 2008
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    i love this... so sweet and full of feeling... its really great...


  • StillLovingYou
    November 8, 2008
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    who was michael?
    this is a great poem


  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    November 7, 2008
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    this is really good, it made me so sad......
    great write, andy!


  • Lisabiza
    November 6, 2008
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    wow

    good job


  • killer vampire666
    November 6, 2008
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    i feel so sad when i read this i hope you feel beter soon im so sorry that this happend to you

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