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Love.. when will i find it?

What is love?
That is the question  I always keep
asking myself
I see it all around me
but for myself  I
have yet to find love that's true

My first two relationships
were both not long
the words "I Love You"
were tossed around more freely
then they should've been
with only led to heartbreak in
the end.

There's a song from
a broadway musical  called Oliver
that fits my love life situation right now
"Where  is love
does it fall from skies above
is it underneath the 
willow tree that i've been dreaming of?"

I ask myself the same question all time
as I am on the quest
to answer the question
What does true love mean?
and
How long will it take me to find it?

Author notes

i dont like to force rhyming. my poems dont tend to turn out very good when i try to force rhyming so this is more of a freee verse poem. hoep you like it and that it fits your contest.

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  • Wolven Roses
    October 30, 2008
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    very nice. thanks

  • PoetryGirl26
    October 29, 2008

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    Somtimes I find you just have to let love find you, and it becomes the most beautiful of all. And Always remember there is love in other things like poetry, friends and family. I hope one day you find a love in someone of your own too! I hope we all!