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Oh mother dear

Oh mother dear have I done something wrong again?
Something to disapoint you?
To make you look down apon me in disgust?
Apparently.

Oh mother dear are you over reacting?
Maybe just a tad?
Taken it to far?
Possible?
Yes?
I agree.

Oh mother dear Should I apoligize?
Beg fogivens?
Forget my values to please you?
I think not.

Oh mother dear Does nothing I care about matter?
my view count?
My heart matter?
No?
Didnt think so

Oh mother dear..

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another wronging by me

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  • The honesty of this is really what makes this a well penned piece. Your emotions are conveyed in a very genuine fashion. Great work


  • PiratexxLove
    January 5
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    i can relate

    Not sure what you are unforgiving of but do not blame yourself. I do not forgive my mother whom abandoned us and her first grandchild to go be with her stupid ex husband..shes still married to my dad and yet she calls everyday to tell me im a horrible child and an even worse mother..what im trying to say is do not let her blame you for anything.