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Carnal Ecstasy

Would you die for me ?
Would you bleed for me?
Would you hang for me?
Would you redeem me from carnal pleasure too sweet ?
I kneel before you and gaze licentiously adoring tortured body sweet
You groan
Hands touch with silken skill ruby blood I have to drink

to quench my everlasting thirst

I kiss the nails that pierce her to wooden beam and smart at pain inflicted by my hand

I stroke with pleasure the scared and torn flesh

 and kiss your feet with such humility

what Ecstasy fills my quivering body

Could you redeem me of pleasures unrealized

Nail me to your cross and let me die

in perfect carnal extasy

 

 

 

 

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  • im dead - go away
    December 10, 2008

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    "and kiss your feet with such humility"
    That line spoke to me the most in the poem, and, I think, more than any other part of the poem, it captured the pure feeling of the BD spirit.


  • Dragon Of Darkness
    November 30, 2008
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    great piece
    good luck


  • ileftthebuilding
    November 28, 2008

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    I love it, great write, its passionate and sweet and very fun to read, best of luck in the contest I wish you the very best


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    November 1, 2008

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    this is damn good and so well expressed here i really think you did a very dark great job with this here dear good luck in the contest

  • soul survivor
    October 30, 2008
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    This is dark, twisted, and erotic all at the same time! I love it! good luck in the contest.


    • RareFlower
      November 2, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment. I really enjoyed writing this little piece of darkness. Thanks again

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