I remember when I first met you
Your crooked smile
Your beautiful brown eyes
The way you took away the pain
How your hand found mine
And melted like we were meant to be
How your hugs made me feel safe
Your smell
Like sweet honey and woodsy lust
The way you stared into my eyes
Like you were looking into my soul
And liked what you saw
Your soft kisses
Warm and safe
I will always remember you
Even though you took your life from me
Leaving me here, alone
No one to hold me
Or kiss my tears away
To tell me everything will be ok
I will never know why you did what you did
But all I know is one day
I will be with you once again
And I will never let go of you
We will be together
Forever
Author notes
Written from the heart. Dedicated to a best friend, why did you leave me?
A contest entry
- I remember when by sheltered.
700 points, ended November 1, 2008, 29 entries
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thank you
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i can tell this was written from the heart
because it flows effortlessly
great write
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