I remember when we were one
Emotionally and socially
I think about a year ago today
But it doesn't make me want you more
I'm finally cured
Only a white scar left
And I know I'd open it again if you wanted me to
A contest entry
- I remember when by sheltered.
700 points, ended November 1, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your most personal & meaningful poem from ( 2008 ) by justgot2loveme.
1500 points, ended December 11, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Pretty emotional, pretty sad too.
The things we don't do for love.
A nice short piece and to the point.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Justgot2loveme
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For such a short piece, it really spoke volumes. I enjoyed it... especially the last line.
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yes, very powerful
especially the final line -
wow, great poem, so few words and such a powerful message, great job and good luck with the contest
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umm. I'd change socially... It's awkward in this context.
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