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Weight Of Fear


It leans upon you

Dragging you as you try to move forward

Invisible quicksand holding you back

Slowly it creeps up your body

Immobilizing your legs, your spine

Shivers run down your back

Under goosefleshed skin

Fear begins to press against your chest

A boulder impossible to dislodge

And you begin to drown in

Stony waters, waves hard like diamonds

As they crash upon your shoulders

Your head swiftly dunks beneath the surface

Hands shooting up toward the hard, icy crust in vain

Your throat fills with scratching, painful shards

Tearing your skin and lungs apart

As you silently scream with your last, dying breath

You are paralyzed, out there in the jungle

A gun barrel pointed at your head




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Author notes

Inspired by the book "The Things They Carried" by Tim O'brien. We had to write a poem based on the weight of fear as a response to this book, so this is what I came up with.

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