I remember when
my shit didn't stink
with the deviousness
I now have to use,
just to survive
out there in this crazy world.
And why is it
that everyone else
plays those squeaky clean
strings of superiority,
when, in reality,
we all crap
in the same sandbox.
Giving birth is also
a wonderful equaliser
amongst women
and the men all piss
at the nearest tree,
no matter their nobility.
Author notes
Think I went a bit off topic, but it was good to rant
A contest entry
- I remember when by sheltered.
700 points, ended November 1, 2008, 29 entries
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there was no topic
indeed, a good rant -
LMFAO! well done!
not what i expected to read from you!
gonna submit to this one too...
best of luck
TAsha
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Gal
You tell them. damnall our shit stinks. Those elitist more than ours. Speak out gal. I love it.
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we all crap
in the same sandbox
I loved this.
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And so say all of us 
What an EXCELLENT 
this is
Best of luck in the contest
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Awesome!!! Damn that's so true too!!!
Brill hun !!
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