When I saw you for the first time,
I felt something growing in my heart,
I am Sure it's not a crime,
and that No one can torn it apart...
Since I first met you,
My life completely changed,
I became more determined,
And like you there is no one i can ever find...
May be i know you a little,
But to me you r a dear friend,
you r a source of Happiness in my life,
And Much More...
Lots of things I wanna tell,
But right now I can say just a few,
I miss You a lot and your smile too,
And counting the days for your arrival to become True...
Dear Countess,
Last words,
HaPpYy Birthday to You...
N.B:
Now i am smiling,
I hope you smile too.
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I liked this, I thought that you expressed yourself well.It was from the heart. and that is the thing that count. you can many beautiful write if its from the heart, and you dont hold back. dont be afraid to write something you feel. Because that will make the write even more interesting. Take care and I will be reading your write more often.
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thx for ur comment...
well i havent wrote anything since ages...but i think ur comment will push me to write something soon...
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thx,,,i tried to view ur poems but they are adult and i am stilll 16...:S:S
but thnks anyway..
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i donot know,
whatever comment i write in here won't be enough to say what i want to say
but you know what i want to say,right?
thank you so much
it's just out the range of words,,,
and yes one REALLY big smile,that shows the teeth
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well,
thank you 4 ur comment,.your opinion reaally difffers with me da most...
yes i knw wht u wana say...the same as wht i wana say i think..
and am soo much glad tht u liked it..
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