time is a heartbeat;
sometimes forgotten
but always there to
offer a reminder.
Author notes
time.
running out of time. not having enough time. the wrong time/bad timing. right time and place, wishing it were a different time etc. etc. whatever it be, write me a sweet poem about some aspect of time. doesn’t have to be the suggestions above, but can be if you’d like.
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired - 10-15 words / 20 Poets by Kiddy.
600 points, ended November 26, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - seven super prompts to select from. by sharptooth.
550 points, ended January 13, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - silver I by Salty Hibiscus.
450 points, ended February 6, 86 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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700 points, ended April 1, 54 entries
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What do you think?
Comments
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This is awesome! I love it! So perfect and such an amazing word choice! ((:
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Well putt, I coundl't agree with you more. Well penned as well.
Good luck
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very true. time controls us but at same time it helps us to plan ahead. nice write. thanks for sharing and good luck.
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wow
its a real honor to place in your contest..
thank you so much!
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short poem
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there's something about getting a brief point across in a few powerful words that really gets me. & this little snippet was quite nice.
the first line "time is a heartbeat" is intriguing.
overall... definitely thought this fit the prompt & i enjoyed reading it.
thanks for entering
hope you enjoyed participating
& best of luck in the contest!
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beautiful words offered here!
Congrats on the silver!
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Interesting. I like the aspect of time being forgotten. Good luck.
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Very profound. We can forget about time, but it will never leave us alone. Amazing take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest!
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I think the image of time as measured in heartbeats is a clever one full of promise.
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Great Take!!!
Time is only a tic before a toc and how accurately you've descibe each heatbeat. The quality of space between each beat outweigh the distance between the two. Best wishes in life and the contest.
peace in light and love
Noah
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very true imagery; well done
good luck in the contest
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Ha ha ha..You are so right. Hey there, I would be happy if you fill in Author Notes with the needful. Pls visit contest page and check for the rules.
Thanks for your time.
Nice job there.
Good luck
Much Love
Kiddy -
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thank you
for the silver.. glad you enjoyed it
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Yes it is true. Good write.
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Nicely done. Good luck in the contest and happy trails
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