+reflect+
[neglect]
your just in time
my
/l/i/f/e/./l/i/n/e/
where can cut out the sky tonight
shred the .stars. to ribbons
so you won't feel so star crossed
what will it say?
pick-me-up.
[pick me up]
pick me [THE FUCK] up.
w
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oh darling
if only it worked that way
w g
r n
o
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w g
whatever are you waiting for?
love you.
[love me?]
but all the love in the world
.will.never.fill.you.up.
Author notes
omnomnomnomnom
god when was the last time i wrote any
*d-i-r-t-y*_>p/r/e/t/t/y<_[GLITTER.SHIT?]
*licks all over*
much to long ago.
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tastes like bleach
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I like it! Good job
Thanks so much for entering 
I really liked the vagueness of the poem while still having so much power, not to mention the dirty pretty style AND formatting (nice job on the wrong's btw 
) Good job
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Nice, I liked it, Sacasim, and True feelings!
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I like this.
I've been attempting dirty pretty but i dont completly understand it.
but yeah anyways... I like how you did "wrong"
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haha thanks, get it, the word is wrong, so it needed to be x'd out. well, thats what i was thinking anyway.
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i like it
very creative with the placement style of the words and i can really feel your feeling
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THANK YOU SIR!whats been going on?
~raven
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nothing much im out of scool yay lol what do you want to know
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thats pretty sweet. i had just remembered you and wanted to see how you were making out. merry christmas!
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aww, i dig it.
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