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Destination

Chapter written; book closed

                    I moved far away....

I found my way back to you

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Prompt: Anywhere is walking distance, if you've got the time.
Nymphadora

A crush from childhood turned into a relationship as adults beyond anything imaginable

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  • Between My Ears
    November 2, 2008

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    I really like that you told us exactly what this as about in your author's notes. Great write! Good luck in the contest!


  • crimsondew
    October 31, 2008
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    Good imagery..lingering in mind ..
    Good luck in the contest!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 31, 2008

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    How delightful, boy, the crushes I remember, thanks for sharing this with me lol and good luck in the contest

  • copper29
    October 30, 2008

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    Aww, cute, and a very good subject for the prompt. I love it and everything about it. Nice take on the prompt and good luck in the contest!

  • Crescitvirtus
    October 30, 2008

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    An interesting take. I know you are up against the word count, but the last line really does need a 'to' between the 'only' and the 'i'.


  • Three Doves
    October 30, 2008

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    A Fantastic write on your chosen prompt. Is it destiny when time or distance cannot keep people apart? 20 years plus passed between my high shool sweatheart and I now married 15 years.
    Best wishes in life and the contest.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • Kiddy
    October 29, 2008

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    That's very sweet. This personal touch is what fuels the poet within with prompts, isn't it.
    Nice one.

    Much Love
    Kiddy


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Great write

  • davidwright silver member
    October 29, 2008
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    Fortunate for you. Sadly many of us can never go back. God luck in the contest and happy trails

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