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Casa de Amigo

When the day is shivering
And the night progressed,
I still know

My senses faint
My heart unchanged
My all in all, still be

Who's to hear better or more?
Who's to tell the long tale
of such a tragedy as untold truth?

Honesty above feelings,
Truth above honour,
Me above forsaken

Shall I need a want
Or lust after me,
Mi amor, I know,
Mi amor, I love

Throughout eternity infiniti,
I love your reign.
In your arms I shall lay in wait,
Mi amor, one true love of me

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