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And I Will Wait (Until The End)

And I will wait until the end,
When the world falls down upon,
Upon the lifeless hand you hold.

And I will wait until the clock,
Chimes the last hours of her life,
The life that you destroyed.

And the clouds roll in,
Covering the broken, beaten sky,
The sky that holds her now.

And I will wait until you can see,
That everything you did,
Everything ran straight through her heart.

You watched as she died,
Watched her body go limp,
Limp from the torture she endured.

And I will just listen,
As you apoligize for what you've done,
But sorry cant bring her back now.

And I will watch as you fall apart,
Regretting ever hurting her at all,
But you will never know her pain.

And I will hold her by the hand,
Taking her away from this aweful place,
The place you thought she always loved.

And I will wait until the end,
When you finally go insane,
Insane from such regret.

You cant take it back,
You fucked up her life,
You destroyed it all.

Some of my weirdness...whatdya think????

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  • Amalthae
    October 29, 2008

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    WOW!!!

    wow i like it.
    "And I will watch as you fall apart,
    Regretting ever hurting her at all,
    But you will never know her pain."

    i like this stanza, it's so true, we never really know how deep ones pain is. bravo.