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Just Like Mommy

When I grow up
I will look just like my Mommy!
Always dreaming of the day
Rubbing my tummy!

I read in a book
that all will come true
just rub your tummy
and never be blue

She is a beautiful person
I want to be the same
Always there for me and helping
I wish I had her name

I would be so happy
following my Mommy's ways
Knowing that all will love me
Always wanting to stay

Thank you Mommy
for being you
Soon I will be all grown up
and follow in your shoes!

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    October 30, 2008
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    Oh no!!! I wish so much more for my daughter!!! I think you wrote a beautiful poem, yet I would wish for my daughter to have much more than what I have, and she has my name.. The meaning in Hebrew is the same...

    I printed this and will present this to our dear little judge later.

    Thank you for entering!