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Backstabbing Friend


Don't call me
I'll just hang up
Don't fucking talk to me
Ignoring you won't be enough
Can't believe you would
be such a BITCH
Didn't you know you were
such a traitor!!

Can't trust you with my secrets
you'd go and tell the world
Can't tell you anything
You're not a best friend
You're not a true friend
Find someone else
To hang out and destroy
All you are to me
is a Backstabbing Friend

Just to let you know
Friends don't try
and make each other miserable
Maybe i should agree
That you need a life
That to have a friend
You have to be a Friend
Its obvious you
didn't know that we will
NEVER speak to each other again!!

Can't trust you with my secrets
you'd go and tell the world
Can't tell you anything
You're not a best friend
You're not a true friend
Find someone else
To hang out and destroy
All you are to me
is a Backstabbing Friend

I've been known
To hold a grudge
This past week
That could happen
with you too
Do you wanna
wait and see
I could promise you
That yes it could

I don't need
anyone that i can trust
being a friend
means listening and keeping a look out for
one another
unlike what you did
did you honestly think that i wouldn't
find out

Some fucking friend you are
you backstabbing BITCH!!!

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  • dustytiger
    October 29, 2008

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    angery, nice

    writing is such a good way to get out your anger. i really liked this poem, it's seething, good work