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Lessons never learned

She wore naivety proudly

Faith and hope like the shoes on her feet

Skipping merrily toward happily ever after

Ignore the nay sayers

   And they watched her fall...

 

                                 Over

                                            and

                                                     over 

                                                              and

                                                                      over

  

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Sometimes we have to keep falling to drum the message into our own heads. Nicely done. best to you in the contest


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    Powerful, yet sad poem
    It has somewhat of an abstract feel to it, yet not as vague

    Very good