Soliloquy
of
tongues;
tipping
velvet
until;
juices
converge
releasing;
ecstasy
Author notes
OH god I hate quickies give me long slow and sensual torment any day
A contest entry
- An Erotic Side Challenge by Master Ktulu.
700 points, ended November 2, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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my hat is off to you and everyone who managed to take ten words and turn out such great writes as this one.
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This is of course a personal sentiment, but I'd think you should win this challenge. This was tasteful, elegant, and hot. Very nicely done. :]
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I do not know what to do with you! You always push the right buttons! I loved this piece and you actually got my thoughts off the election for a few moments with this one - since I am a junkie it is a bigger achievement than you think. Well done on this one.
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long slow and sensual torment...
I agree with that statement.
As for this 10 words..Very well done.
Good luck in the challenge.
**Master Ktulu** -
Short and very tasty! Great job here! Good luck in the contest.
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Nice one Jems m'Lady
i think it needs to be slowly done so it can be enjoyed
or practiced 
xxx Your angel xxx
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wanna practice with me baby????
YLD
xxx Jem xxx -
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Yes please Jems m'Lady i will be honoured to practice with you
if it pleases you
xxx Your angel xxx
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um ahhh ummm yeah it pleases oh ya it pleases.
love you baby
YLD
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Oh sis you did great, and I agree, right now I want long and sensual with someone.. but... enought about that .. this is great.
Riftkin
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Ummm close your eyes and let it ..... um flow.... thanks Sis
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