existence
ensures collectively
that we're to breathe
to fulfill our own desires
during life's meaninglessness
Author notes
PROMPT QUOTE: Time you enjoy wasting is not wasted.
- John Lennon
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired - 10-15 words / 20 Poets by Kiddy.
600 points, ended November 26, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hmm, this is interesting. i like the quote, and your poem was amazing i like the message behind your words keep penning
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I think of as long as we have breath, another day...nice short write to capture that vision...Blessings
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This is an interesting write. I like the spacing and the flow of the writing. Good luck in the contest!
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Nice word choice. I love the phrase "life's meaninglessness." Good take on the prompt. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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Not sure this accords with my own philosophy but it is well expressed.
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Life is meant to be lived to the fullest regarless of how meaningless one may feel.!!!! Great Take on the prompt. Best wishes in life and the contest.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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I think that this is good to have goals and see them achieved is a great feeling thanks for sharing good luck to you in the contest be well
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To fulfil lifetime goals is worth while Good write
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beautiful write; nice take on the prompt
Good luck in the contest
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it's full of life.
you have penned brilliance here. highly creative and summarizes existentialism.
Good one
Cheers
Kiddy
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