Nirvana

Future margaritas aren't marginal
We're bound to climax beneath coconut trees
Let's activate what we've been waiting for

The exact scenery means little to me

As long as your breeze returns each morn

After taking my breath the night before

Some might think I'm hayseed for assuming

But this melted heart believes it's possible

To merge complete into your sweet center

We could make our own nirvana

Author notes

[.5.] Song/lyric prompt:

I'm Yours - Jason Mraz

10 lines.

1 - 8 of 8

By me, right now

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PerfectImperfection
October 29, 2008

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This is lovely, there is nothing wrong with holding onto hope when its worth your heart's while. Well penned to go along with the song prompt. Best wishes in the contest!
kiwigirljacks
October 29, 2008

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This is fab! I don't kno the song.. but you made me want to listen to it!
Poetic Tasha
October 29, 2008

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yay i love this song im glad you used it
great write, thanks so much for finding the time to enter hun, i know its not easy for ya right now
best of luck!

TAsha
Cannonsfire
October 29, 2008
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See I have made you a Mraz fan lol Nice job hun C
- Cerulean Sunrise
  October 29, 2008
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  I liked him before.
  
  Thanks.
- Poetic Tasha
  October 29, 2008
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  if you're a Mraz fan I invite you to enter if the song so inspires you to
Kiddy
October 29, 2008

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Work in progress? This itself sounds too good, friend!...bookmarking it, will get back to it laters.

Cheers
kiddy
- Cerulean Sunrise
  October 29, 2008
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  Is done.