Bryce, you do not know me, and vice versa
but, I do poetically know your mother on the site,
I've grown to love her through her penning talent
and I do know that she's tried to raise you up right
You have the most beautiful blueberry orb's like the sky
I hear you race around like a chicken with no head,
you also have the very same birthday as my sis Vicki Renae
another Scorpio, the scorpion, opiniated, born and bred
I know how life has dealt you some real bad nasty blows
I don't even know you, but I pray for you to find your way,
God has a special racetrack bulit just for you my dear
Just some thoughts from POETDONTKNOWIT on your 20th birthday.
So enjoy your newfound youthdom, and stay a sweetie pie
take care of that awesome mom of yours, stay by her side,
turning twenty is a blessing, use it to your full potential
and next time your in Illinois stop by and give me a joyride!
Author notes
Written for the son of one of God's precious angel's. She's a survivor, and so is Bryce!
10/29/2008
POETDONTKNOWIT
A contest entry
- My Bryce Is Turning 20 by stavykm.
1100 points, ended November 18, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Superb
A very fine write and tribute. You expressed your thoughts quite clearly. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
You Are SOOOO Funny!!!
I liked this light hearted piece you penned for Bryce!!! Mine was a little heavy I think...But I just don't have the wit that you possess I guess.just sappiness...lol..This will bring a smile to Bryce's face for sure I see Kelle already had the pleasure of reading and she seemed to find it amusing as well!!! Thanks for sharing you talent and wit with us tonight!!! Quite enjoyable read!!!~~~Toni~~~
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So Fun & Beautiful
Oh thank you so much for writing for us. This is just fun and beautiful. I love the ryhme and how you are a part of the poem. Well actually all three of us. LOL This was just great and I know my Bryce will just love this. You never know when he could be racing in Illinois. I'm sure he'd love to take yiou on a joy ride. I'll pay attention to see if there is a race for him there. We shall always treasure this poem you wrote. Thank you again for wishing my son a Happy 20th Birthday. He deserves so much and the beauty of love and friendship is the best gift ever. I just love you dear friend. Best wishes in the contest.
Wishing You Many Blessings
Much Love,
Kelle Marie
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always look after mum,,,lol lovely poem good luck
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